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Bite Your Tongue!

I will use this space to post and analyze linguistic abominations from various business communication products. Feel free to add and discuss your own, but please be discreet about identifying the perpetrators.

Here’s my entry for today (2/14/10).

I received this in an e-mail from a very large corporation. Unfortunately, this is not the first time I’ve seen this awkward placement of the adjective form of “below” in business communication:

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  1. Carolyn
    May 4, 2010 at 9:23 am | #1

    An excerpt from a job description posted by a major corporation. They were looking for a communications manager with, among other things, these attributes:

    “Excellent creative writing skills, able to identify and develop clear, customer orientated messages. Strong attention to detail.”

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